The Sinner's Song

Category: Writers Block

Post 1 by HauntedReverie (doing the bad mango) on Tuesday, 07-Mar-2006 9:28:52

I'm singing part of this stupid little poem in my audio profile haha. I made this up all in my head a while ago, stealing the melody from an old chorus song. and yeah it's pretty bad and cliche', but I'm very very bored so here goes.

My lord hold me fast in your mighty embrace.

and keep me pure and safe in your grace.

yet as I sleep oh I pray to thee,

my God my savior bless this last dream.

Now as the tears fall in a silent stream

I reach for your hand and cry "catch me"

I'm screaming my Lord and I'm falling fast,

my God releive me of those memories of then.

With hope and faith I take your hand.

I know your love will save me in the end.

The fallen I am I pray for salvation.

My God please forgive me for the sinner I am.

Post 2 by Fruity Biscuit (fluffy things are grate come join me on my cloud. ) on Tuesday, 07-Mar-2006 10:01:46

well i am not one for religous things cala but it is lovely. huggles.
i like the words.

Post 3 by poet (The premium poet) on Tuesday, 07-Mar-2006 12:23:31

As do I, Cala. Good job.

Post 4 by HauntedReverie (doing the bad mango) on Tuesday, 07-Mar-2006 20:45:18

I like the melody, it is pretty and jumps all over the place

Post 5 by Grace (I've now got the ggold prolific poster award! wahoo! well done to me!) on Thursday, 09-Mar-2006 5:34:07

Seems only that one word 'tis left unsaid...the word...